Monday, December 21, 2009

The Lost Cachebra

Once upon a time there was a cat named Mickey. This cat wasn't a normal cat this cat was a Cachebra. A Cachebra is a cat, a cheetah, and a zebra all mixed in one. If you ever saw Mickey he would look like a normal cat, but then if you look closer he has cheetah and zebra markings. This is the story behind Mickey the Cachebra and how he got lost in Wal-Mart.
One day Mickey was driving his car to Wal-Mart. Mickey got out of his car and started walking into Wal-Mart. When Mickey got into Wal-Mart he got his shopping list out and looked at what he needed from the store. Mickey needed to get some present for his Christmas party that he was having that night, and some othe rChristmas decorations. While he was shopping, Mickey ran into some of his frineds. Rachel the regualr cat and Abbey , who was also a Cachebra. Mickey invited Rachel and Abbey to his party that night. After they had talked for a little bit they all went their spereate ways shopping at Wal-Mart. Mickey got on his way to finish his shopping, when a giant human namned Emily came up and started petting him. Mickey got scared and froze and couldn't move. Emily picked him up and started leaving the store with him! Mickey got so scared that he was going to miss his party and that Rachel and ABbey would never talk to him again! Mickey would be devistated if that happened because he loves Abbey so much! Abbey was the only other Cachebra in all the world! Mickey kept thinking about this over and over again! Finally he decided to jump out of Emily's arms, but when he got down he idn't know where he was, Mickey was lost and didn't know where to go. Mickey wondered around for two hours trying to find his way back to Wal-Mart. Right when Mickey was about to leave he heard a honking noise. Mickey turned around to see that it was Rachel and Abbey coming to save him. Rachel and Abbey gave him a ride back to his car and Mickey wen thome to get ready for the party so did Rachel and Abbey.

It was time for the party to beging and all of Mickey's friends were there except for Abbey and Rachel. Just then in walked Abbey with Rachel following behind. They both looked beautiful. Mickey walked up to Abbey and proposed and Abbey said yes, and they lived happily ever after. As for rachel she met another cat that was just like her and they fell in love and got married as well. THE END

2 comments:

  1. Very well done! I enjoyed your ideas and your vocab. However I noticed a few proofing errors. But overall I really did like the story

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  2. I thought that was so funny!I liked how you used real people! I noticed some errors in spelling and things like that but it was still really funny!

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